Thoughts and ramblings from a Canadian mind (The thoughts and ramblings contained herein are not necessarily the views of other Canadians. Canada will not be held responsible if anything offends or annoys). Be forewarned that you may also find attempts at writing, poetry, etc.
Tuesday, June 07, 2005
Ravenous
Beware the virgin
knowledge of book
complete, unfinished
ropes gain not
attain indulgence
caution
unheeded
beguiled, bewilderment
lust unknown gained
beware the virgin
prepared
Nth degree
-J.G.Smith (06/07/05)
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
I envy those last three lines . . . they're really good!! And "beware the virgin" is just such a great hook.
It loses some energy in the middle, but oh those last lines . . . yep.
1 comment:
I envy those last three lines . . . they're really good!! And "beware the virgin" is just such a great hook.
It loses some energy in the middle, but oh those last lines . . . yep.
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